Score: 10

"wow"

submission: *What Have I Done? *

date: April 16, 2008

like the storys and the song together they make me cry

23/may/2007
The day of love and passion

I can hear the silence of the wind and the river,
I can see the birds feeding their young and I can feel my tears rolling,
tears that gather no happiness.
The silence was broken by the ring of my phone.
I picked it out of my pocket,
it was as heavy as lead.
I answered to hear her sweet as sugar voice,
and her face as if she was in front of me would be as beautiful as the angels,
her hair like gold shining in the sun,
her eyes the colour of the sky with no clouds,
her sugary voice sang out in my ears.
"I was crazy",
oh boy, she got that right!
I was crazily in love with her.
I dropped the phone.
It fell into the river and was imprisoned in destruction for ever.
I jumped with love and passion.
I fell with the wind whistling past and with the birds chirping,
then all was quiet for just three seconds,
then I hit the water with the river rushing past with such force
it was like I was soaring fast to the heavens.

Score: 10

"i might like to use this in a flash can i?"

submission: ++ Loud Whispers Loop ++

date: March 27, 2008

can i plz u will get your name in the creds and all